| 模型 | 模型答案 | 正确答案 |
|---|---|---|
| 金声玉亮2.0 | 【答案】 I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to hold me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passed away. She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very well. He was tall, with broad shoulders and a beard that turned from black to gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set him apart from others in our small town. He was strong and powerful. In fact, he even scared my classmates away when they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have ever known. <eoa> |
holding改为 hold passes改为 passed much shoulder改为 shoulders toward改为 into himself改为 him 加and 去掉 a during never改成 ever |
| deepseekr1 | 【答案】I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to hold me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passed away. She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very well. He was tall, with broad shoulders and a beard that turned from black to gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set him apart from others in our small town. He was strong and powerful. In fact, he even scared my classmates away when they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have ever known. <eoa> （修改说明： 1. **holding → hold**（固定搭配“used to do”）； 2. **passes → passed**（时态一致）； 3. **is → was**（时态一致）； 4. **much → well**（修饰动词用well）； 5. **shoulder → shoulders**（复数表泛指）； 6. **toward → to**（固定搭配“from...to”）； 7. **himself → him**（set sb. apart）； 8. **a fact → fact**（固定短语“in fact”）； 9. **during → when**（引导时间状语从句）； 10. **never → ever**（逻辑修正，“从未”改为“曾经”）） |
holding改为 hold passes改为 passed much shoulder改为 shoulders toward改为 into himself改为 him 加and 去掉 a during never改成 ever |
| gpto1 | 【答案】 I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to \underline{holding}\\hold me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she \underline{passes}\\passed away. She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very \underline{much}\\well. He was tall, with broad \underline{shoulder}\\shoulders and a beard that turned from black \underline{toward}\\to gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set \underline{himself}\\him apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. \\\a\ In fact, he even scared my classmates away \underline{during}\\when they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have \underline{never}\\ever known. <eoa> |
holding改为 hold passes改为 passed much shoulder改为 shoulders toward改为 into himself改为 him 加and 去掉 a during never改成 ever |
| GPT-4o | 【答案】 I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to hold me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passed away. She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very well. He was tall, with broad shoulders and a beard that turned from black to gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set him apart from others in our small town. He was strong and powerful. In fact, he even scared my classmates away when they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have ever known. <eoa> |
holding改为 hold passes改为 passed much shoulder改为 shoulders toward改为 into himself改为 him 加and 去掉 a during never改成 ever |
| llama3.1-70B-Instruct | 【答案】 I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to ∧hold me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passed away. She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulders and a beard that turned from black to gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set him apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In fact, he even scared my classmates away when they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have ever known.<eoa> |
holding改为 hold passes改为 passed much shoulder改为 shoulders toward改为 into himself改为 him 加and 去掉 a during never改成 ever |
| llama3.1-405B-Instruct | 【答案】 I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to hold me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passed away. She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very well. He was tall, with broad shoulders and a beard that turned from black to gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set him apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In fact, he even scared my classmates away when they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have ever known. <eoa> |
holding改为 hold passes改为 passed much shoulder改为 shoulders toward改为 into himself改为 him 加and 去掉 a during never改成 ever |
| DeepSeek-Coder-V2 | "【答案】\nI hardly remember my grandmother. She used to hold me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passed away. She is just a distant memory for me now.\n\nI remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulders and a beard that turned from black to gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set him apart from others in our small town; he was strong and powerful. In fact, he even scared my classmates away when they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have ever known.<eoa>" | holding改为 hold passes改为 passed much shoulder改为 shoulders toward改为 into himself改为 him 加and 去掉 a during never改成 ever |
| Qwen2-72B-Instruct | "【答案】\nI hardly remember my grandmother. She used to hold me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passed away. She is just a distant memory for me now. \nI remember my grandfather very well. He was tall, with broad shoulders and a beard that turned from black to gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set him apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In fact, he even scared my classmates away when they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have ever known.\n<eoa>" | holding改为 hold passes改为 passed much shoulder改为 shoulders toward改为 into himself改为 him 加and 去掉 a during never改成 ever |
| baichuan4 | 【答案】 1. 第一句：hardly改为rarely。 2. 第二句：holding改为hold。 3. 第三句：passes改为passed。 4. 第四句：much改为well。 5. 第五句：shoulder改为shoulders。 6. 第六句：toward改为to。 7. 第七句：himself改为him。 8. 第八句：去掉a。 9. 第九句：they前加when。 10. 第十句：never改为ever。 修正后的文章： I rarely remember my grandmother. She used to hold me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passed away. She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very well. He was tall, with broad shoulders and a beard that turned from black to gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set him apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In fact, he even scared my classmates away when they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have ever known. |
holding改为 hold passes改为 passed much shoulder改为 shoulders toward改为 into himself改为 him 加and 去掉 a during never改成 ever |
| doubao | 【答案】 I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known. <eoa> 【答案】 I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding→hold me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes→passed away. She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very much→well. He was tall, with broad shoulder→shoulders and a beard that turned from black toward→to gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself→him apart from others in our small town,→and he was strong and powerful. In a→去掉 a fact, he even scared my classmates away during→when they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never→ever known. <eoa> |
holding改为 hold passes改为 passed much shoulder改为 shoulders toward改为 into himself改为 him 加and 去掉 a during never改成 ever |
| minimax | 【答案】 I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to hold me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passed away. She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulders and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set him apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have ever known. <eoa> |
holding改为 hold passes改为 passed much shoulder改为 shoulders toward改为 into himself改为 him 加and 去掉 a during never改成 ever |
| kimi | 【答案】I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to hold me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passed away. She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulders and a beard that turned from black to gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set him apart from others in our small town; he was strong and powerful. In fact, he even scared my classmates away when they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have ever known.<eoa> |
holding改为 hold passes改为 passed much shoulder改为 shoulders toward改为 into himself改为 him 加and 去掉 a during never改成 ever |
| wenxinyiyan | 【答案】 I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to holding me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passes away. She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very much. He was tall, with broad shoulder and a beard that turned from black toward gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set himself apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. In a fact, he even scared my classmates away during they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have never known. 1. holding改为hold (used to do sth.) 2. sing改为singing (and连接并列的动词形式应一致) 3. passes改为passed (时态应与前文一致，用过去时) 4. very much改为very well (remember为动词，用well修饰) 5. shoulder改为shoulders (应该用复数形式) 6. toward改为to (turn from black to gray为固定搭配) 7. 去掉himself (set apart from中的apart为形容词，不用反身代词) 8. he was前加and (两个句子需要连接词) 9. 去掉a (in fact为固定短语，中间不加冠词) 10. during改为when (引导时间状语从句) <eoa> |
holding改为 hold passes改为 passed much shoulder改为 shoulders toward改为 into himself改为 him 加and 去掉 a during never改成 ever |
| zhipu | 【答案】 I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to hold^ me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passed^ away. She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very well^. He was tall, with broad shoulders^ and a beard that turned from black to^ gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set him^ apart from others in our small town;^ he was strong and powerful. In fact,^ he even scared my classmates away during^ they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have ever^ known.<eoa> |
holding改为 hold passes改为 passed much shoulder改为 shoulders toward改为 into himself改为 him 加and 去掉 a during never改成 ever |
| gpto1 | 【答案】 I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to \underline{holding}\\hold me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she \underline{passes}\\passed away. She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very \underline{much}\\well. He was tall, with broad \underline{shoulder}\\shoulders and a beard that turned from black \underline{toward}\\to gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set \underline{himself}\\him apart from others in our small town, he was strong and powerful. \\\a\ In fact, he even scared my classmates away \underline{during}\\when they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have \underline{never}\\ever known. <eoa> |
holding改为 hold passes改为 passed much shoulder改为 shoulders toward改为 into himself改为 him 加and 去掉 a during never改成 ever |
| deepseekv3 | 【答案】I hardly remember my grandmother. She used to hold me on her knees and sing old songs. I was only four when she passed away. She is just a distant memory for me now. I remember my grandfather very well. He was tall, with broad shoulders and a beard that turned from black to gray over the years. He had a deep voice, which set him apart from others in our small town. He was strong and powerful. In fact, he even scared my classmates away when they came over to play or do homework with me. However, he was the gentlest man I have ever known.<eoa> |
holding改为 hold passes改为 passed much shoulder改为 shoulders toward改为 into himself改为 him 加and 去掉 a during never改成 ever |