问题

请解答下面的英语短文改错题，仔细阅读题目并充分结合你你已有的知识，找出其中10处需要改动的地方。请你一步步思考，把修改后的短文写在【答案】和<eoa>之间。
完整的题目回答格式如下：【答案】 ...<eoa>
请你严格按照上述格式作答。
题目如下:短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The teenage year from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worse years in my life. At the first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by yourself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think such. They always tell me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be freely from them. I showed them I was independent by wear strange clothes. Now I am leaving home to college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever need help.

答案

模型 模型答案 正确答案
金声玉亮2.0 【答案】
The teenage \year\ years from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and \worse\ worst years in my life. At the \first\ beginning, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by \yourself\ myself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think \such\ so. They always \tell\ told me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be \freely\ free from them. I showed them I was independent by \wear\ wearing strange clothes. Now I am leaving home \to\ for college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever ∧ I need help.
<eoa>		 1．year改为years．考查名词复数．teenage years青少年应该是一段时间，为可数名词复数．
2．worse改为worst．考查形容词最高级．and为并列连词，the best相对的是the worst，应为最高级．
3．去掉the．考查固定搭配．at first意为"首先；最早"，是固定搭配．
4．yourself改为myself．考查代词．主语和宾语为同一个人，用反身代词myself作宾语．
5．such改为so．考查代词．根据句意：但我父母不这么认为．应为"they don’t think so."，so指代前面的一个观点．
6．tell改为told．考查动词时态．此处讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
7．freely改为free．考查形容词．be动词后接形容词作表语．
8．wear改为wearing．考查动名词．by是介词，后接动词时用动名词形式．
9．to改为for．考查介词．表示目的应用目的介词for，意为"以（提及地）为目的地"．
10．加I 考查代词．考查从句．whenever引导时间状语从句，句中缺少主语I，需加上人称代词I．
deepseekr1

【答案】The teenage years from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worst years in my life. At first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by myself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think so. They always told me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be free from them. I showed them I was independent by wearing strange clothes. Now I am leaving home for college. Soon, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever I need help.<eoa>		 1．year改为years．考查名词复数．teenage years青少年应该是一段时间，为可数名词复数．
2．worse改为worst．考查形容词最高级．and为并列连词，the best相对的是the worst，应为最高级．
3．去掉the．考查固定搭配．at first意为"首先；最早"，是固定搭配．
4．yourself改为myself．考查代词．主语和宾语为同一个人，用反身代词myself作宾语．
5．such改为so．考查代词．根据句意：但我父母不这么认为．应为"they don’t think so."，so指代前面的一个观点．
6．tell改为told．考查动词时态．此处讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
7．freely改为free．考查形容词．be动词后接形容词作表语．
8．wear改为wearing．考查动名词．by是介词，后接动词时用动名词形式．
9．to改为for．考查介词．表示目的应用目的介词for，意为"以（提及地）为目的地"．
10．加I 考查代词．考查从句．whenever引导时间状语从句，句中缺少主语I，需加上人称代词I．
gpto1 【答案】
The teenage years from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worst years of my life. At first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by myself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think so. They always told me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be free from them. I showed them I was independent by wearing strange clothes. Now I am leaving home for college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever I need help.
<eoa>		 1．year改为years．考查名词复数．teenage years青少年应该是一段时间，为可数名词复数．
2．worse改为worst．考查形容词最高级．and为并列连词，the best相对的是the worst，应为最高级．
3．去掉the．考查固定搭配．at first意为"首先；最早"，是固定搭配．
4．yourself改为myself．考查代词．主语和宾语为同一个人，用反身代词myself作宾语．
5．such改为so．考查代词．根据句意：但我父母不这么认为．应为"they don’t think so."，so指代前面的一个观点．
6．tell改为told．考查动词时态．此处讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
7．freely改为free．考查形容词．be动词后接形容词作表语．
8．wear改为wearing．考查动名词．by是介词，后接动词时用动名词形式．
9．to改为for．考查介词．表示目的应用目的介词for，意为"以（提及地）为目的地"．
10．加I 考查代词．考查从句．whenever引导时间状语从句，句中缺少主语I，需加上人称代词I．
GPT-4o 【答案】
The teenage \year\ from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and \worse\ years in my life. At the \first\, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by \yourself\. However, my parents didn’t seem to think \such\. They always \tell\ me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be \freely\ from them. I showed them I was independent by \wear\ strange clothes. Now I am leaving home \to\ college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever ∧ need help.

The teenage years from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worst years in my life. At first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by myself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think so. They always told me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be free from them. I showed them I was independent by wearing strange clothes. Now I am leaving home for college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever I need help.
<eoa>		 1．year改为years．考查名词复数．teenage years青少年应该是一段时间，为可数名词复数．
2．worse改为worst．考查形容词最高级．and为并列连词，the best相对的是the worst，应为最高级．
3．去掉the．考查固定搭配．at first意为"首先；最早"，是固定搭配．
4．yourself改为myself．考查代词．主语和宾语为同一个人，用反身代词myself作宾语．
5．such改为so．考查代词．根据句意：但我父母不这么认为．应为"they don’t think so."，so指代前面的一个观点．
6．tell改为told．考查动词时态．此处讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
7．freely改为free．考查形容词．be动词后接形容词作表语．
8．wear改为wearing．考查动名词．by是介词，后接动词时用动名词形式．
9．to改为for．考查介词．表示目的应用目的介词for，意为"以（提及地）为目的地"．
10．加I 考查代词．考查从句．whenever引导时间状语从句，句中缺少主语I，需加上人称代词I．
llama3.1-70B-Instruct

【答案】 The teenage years from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worst years in my life. At first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by myself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think so. They always told me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be free from them. I showed them I was independent by wearing strange clothes. Now I am leaving home for college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever I need help. <eoa>		 1．year改为years．考查名词复数．teenage years青少年应该是一段时间，为可数名词复数．
2．worse改为worst．考查形容词最高级．and为并列连词，the best相对的是the worst，应为最高级．
3．去掉the．考查固定搭配．at first意为"首先；最早"，是固定搭配．
4．yourself改为myself．考查代词．主语和宾语为同一个人，用反身代词myself作宾语．
5．such改为so．考查代词．根据句意：但我父母不这么认为．应为"they don’t think so."，so指代前面的一个观点．
6．tell改为told．考查动词时态．此处讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
7．freely改为free．考查形容词．be动词后接形容词作表语．
8．wear改为wearing．考查动名词．by是介词，后接动词时用动名词形式．
9．to改为for．考查介词．表示目的应用目的介词for，意为"以（提及地）为目的地"．
10．加I 考查代词．考查从句．whenever引导时间状语从句，句中缺少主语I，需加上人称代词I．
llama3.1-405B-Instruct

【答案】

The teenage years from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worst years in my life. At first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by myself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think so. They always told me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be free from them. I showed them I was independent by wearing strange clothes. Now I am leaving home for college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever I need help.

<eoa>		 1．year改为years．考查名词复数．teenage years青少年应该是一段时间，为可数名词复数．
2．worse改为worst．考查形容词最高级．and为并列连词，the best相对的是the worst，应为最高级．
3．去掉the．考查固定搭配．at first意为"首先；最早"，是固定搭配．
4．yourself改为myself．考查代词．主语和宾语为同一个人，用反身代词myself作宾语．
5．such改为so．考查代词．根据句意：但我父母不这么认为．应为"they don’t think so."，so指代前面的一个观点．
6．tell改为told．考查动词时态．此处讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
7．freely改为free．考查形容词．be动词后接形容词作表语．
8．wear改为wearing．考查动名词．by是介词，后接动词时用动名词形式．
9．to改为for．考查介词．表示目的应用目的介词for，意为"以（提及地）为目的地"．
10．加I 考查代词．考查从句．whenever引导时间状语从句，句中缺少主语I，需加上人称代词I．
DeepSeek-Coder-V2 "【答案】\nThe teenage years from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worst years in my life. At first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by myself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think so. They always told me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn't understand me, so I hoped I could be free from them. I showed them I was independent by wearing strange clothes. Now I am leaving home for college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever I need help.<eoa>" 1．year改为years．考查名词复数．teenage years青少年应该是一段时间，为可数名词复数．
2．worse改为worst．考查形容词最高级．and为并列连词，the best相对的是the worst，应为最高级．
3．去掉the．考查固定搭配．at first意为"首先；最早"，是固定搭配．
4．yourself改为myself．考查代词．主语和宾语为同一个人，用反身代词myself作宾语．
5．such改为so．考查代词．根据句意：但我父母不这么认为．应为"they don’t think so."，so指代前面的一个观点．
6．tell改为told．考查动词时态．此处讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
7．freely改为free．考查形容词．be动词后接形容词作表语．
8．wear改为wearing．考查动名词．by是介词，后接动词时用动名词形式．
9．to改为for．考查介词．表示目的应用目的介词for，意为"以（提及地）为目的地"．
10．加I 考查代词．考查从句．whenever引导时间状语从句，句中缺少主语I，需加上人称代词I．
Qwen2-72B-Instruct "【答案】\nThe teenage years from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worst years in my life. At first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by myself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think so. They always told me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be free from them. I showed them I was independent by wearing strange clothes. Now I am leaving home for college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever I need help.\n<eoa>" 1．year改为years．考查名词复数．teenage years青少年应该是一段时间，为可数名词复数．
2．worse改为worst．考查形容词最高级．and为并列连词，the best相对的是the worst，应为最高级．
3．去掉the．考查固定搭配．at first意为"首先；最早"，是固定搭配．
4．yourself改为myself．考查代词．主语和宾语为同一个人，用反身代词myself作宾语．
5．such改为so．考查代词．根据句意：但我父母不这么认为．应为"they don’t think so."，so指代前面的一个观点．
6．tell改为told．考查动词时态．此处讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
7．freely改为free．考查形容词．be动词后接形容词作表语．
8．wear改为wearing．考查动名词．by是介词，后接动词时用动名词形式．
9．to改为for．考查介词．表示目的应用目的介词for，意为"以（提及地）为目的地"．
10．加I 考查代词．考查从句．whenever引导时间状语从句，句中缺少主语I，需加上人称代词I．
baichuan4 【答案】
1. 第一句中的"year"应该改为"years"，因为这里指的是复数的时间段。
2. 第一句中的"were"应该改为"is"，因为这里描述的是一个普遍的事实，应该使用一般现在时。
3. 第二句中的"worse"应该改为"worst"，因为这里是在描述最好的和最坏的年份，应该使用最高级。
4. 第三句中的"At the first"应该改为"At first"，因为这里是一个固定短语，不需要定冠词。
5. 第三句中的"yourself"应该改为"myself"，因为这里的主语是"I"，应该使用反身代词"myself"。
6. 第四句中的"such"应该改为"so"，因为这里是在描述父母的看法，应该使用"so"来代替上文提到的内容。
7. 第五句中的"tell"应该改为"told"，因为这里描述的是过去的事情，应该使用一般过去时。
8. 第六句中的"freely"应该改为"free"，因为这里需要一个形容词来修饰"from them"，而不是副词。
9. 第七句中的"wear"应该改为"wearing"，因为这里是在描述通过穿着奇怪的衣服来展示自己的独立性，应该使用现在分词形式。
10. 第九句中的"whenever"应该改为"when"，因为这里是在描述当需要帮助的时候，应该使用连词"when"。

修改后的短文如下：

The teenage years from 13 to 19 is the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worst years in my life. At first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by myself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think so. They always told me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me, so I hoped I could be free from them. I showed them I was independent by wearing strange clothes. Now I am leaving home for college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to when I need help.		 1．year改为years．考查名词复数．teenage years青少年应该是一段时间，为可数名词复数．
2．worse改为worst．考查形容词最高级．and为并列连词，the best相对的是the worst，应为最高级．
3．去掉the．考查固定搭配．at first意为"首先；最早"，是固定搭配．
4．yourself改为myself．考查代词．主语和宾语为同一个人，用反身代词myself作宾语．
5．such改为so．考查代词．根据句意：但我父母不这么认为．应为"they don’t think so."，so指代前面的一个观点．
6．tell改为told．考查动词时态．此处讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
7．freely改为free．考查形容词．be动词后接形容词作表语．
8．wear改为wearing．考查动名词．by是介词，后接动词时用动名词形式．
9．to改为for．考查介词．表示目的应用目的介词for，意为"以（提及地）为目的地"．
10．加I 考查代词．考查从句．whenever引导时间状语从句，句中缺少主语I，需加上人称代词I．
doubao 【答案】The teenage years from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worst years in my life. At first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by myself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think so. They always told me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be free from them. I showed them I was independent by wearing strange clothes. Now I am leaving home for college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever I need help. <eoa> 1．year改为years．考查名词复数．teenage years青少年应该是一段时间，为可数名词复数．
2．worse改为worst．考查形容词最高级．and为并列连词，the best相对的是the worst，应为最高级．
3．去掉the．考查固定搭配．at first意为"首先；最早"，是固定搭配．
4．yourself改为myself．考查代词．主语和宾语为同一个人，用反身代词myself作宾语．
5．such改为so．考查代词．根据句意：但我父母不这么认为．应为"they don’t think so."，so指代前面的一个观点．
6．tell改为told．考查动词时态．此处讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
7．freely改为free．考查形容词．be动词后接形容词作表语．
8．wear改为wearing．考查动名词．by是介词，后接动词时用动名词形式．
9．to改为for．考查介词．表示目的应用目的介词for，意为"以（提及地）为目的地"．
10．加I 考查代词．考查从句．whenever引导时间状语从句，句中缺少主语I，需加上人称代词I．
minimax 【答案】
The teenage years from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worst years in my life. At first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by myself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think so. They always told me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me, so I hoped I could be free from them. I showed them I was independent by wearing strange clothes. Now I am leaving home for college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever I need help.
<eoa>		 1．year改为years．考查名词复数．teenage years青少年应该是一段时间，为可数名词复数．
2．worse改为worst．考查形容词最高级．and为并列连词，the best相对的是the worst，应为最高级．
3．去掉the．考查固定搭配．at first意为"首先；最早"，是固定搭配．
4．yourself改为myself．考查代词．主语和宾语为同一个人，用反身代词myself作宾语．
5．such改为so．考查代词．根据句意：但我父母不这么认为．应为"they don’t think so."，so指代前面的一个观点．
6．tell改为told．考查动词时态．此处讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
7．freely改为free．考查形容词．be动词后接形容词作表语．
8．wear改为wearing．考查动名词．by是介词，后接动词时用动名词形式．
9．to改为for．考查介词．表示目的应用目的介词for，意为"以（提及地）为目的地"．
10．加I 考查代词．考查从句．whenever引导时间状语从句，句中缺少主语I，需加上人称代词I．
kimi 【答案】The teenage years from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worst years in my life. At first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by myself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think so. They always told me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be free from them. I showed them I was independent by wearing strange clothes. Now I am leaving home for college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever I need help.<eoa> 1．year改为years．考查名词复数．teenage years青少年应该是一段时间，为可数名词复数．
2．worse改为worst．考查形容词最高级．and为并列连词，the best相对的是the worst，应为最高级．
3．去掉the．考查固定搭配．at first意为"首先；最早"，是固定搭配．
4．yourself改为myself．考查代词．主语和宾语为同一个人，用反身代词myself作宾语．
5．such改为so．考查代词．根据句意：但我父母不这么认为．应为"they don’t think so."，so指代前面的一个观点．
6．tell改为told．考查动词时态．此处讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
7．freely改为free．考查形容词．be动词后接形容词作表语．
8．wear改为wearing．考查动名词．by是介词，后接动词时用动名词形式．
9．to改为for．考查介词．表示目的应用目的介词for，意为"以（提及地）为目的地"．
10．加I 考查代词．考查从句．whenever引导时间状语从句，句中缺少主语I，需加上人称代词I．
wenxinyiyan 【答案】
The teenage years from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worst years in my life. At first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by myself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think so. They always told me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be free from them. I showed them I was independent by wearing strange clothes. Now I am leaving home for college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever I need help.
<eoa>		 1．year改为years．考查名词复数．teenage years青少年应该是一段时间，为可数名词复数．
2．worse改为worst．考查形容词最高级．and为并列连词，the best相对的是the worst，应为最高级．
3．去掉the．考查固定搭配．at first意为"首先；最早"，是固定搭配．
4．yourself改为myself．考查代词．主语和宾语为同一个人，用反身代词myself作宾语．
5．such改为so．考查代词．根据句意：但我父母不这么认为．应为"they don’t think so."，so指代前面的一个观点．
6．tell改为told．考查动词时态．此处讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
7．freely改为free．考查形容词．be动词后接形容词作表语．
8．wear改为wearing．考查动名词．by是介词，后接动词时用动名词形式．
9．to改为for．考查介词．表示目的应用目的介词for，意为"以（提及地）为目的地"．
10．加I 考查代词．考查从句．whenever引导时间状语从句，句中缺少主语I，需加上人称代词I．
zhipu 【答案】
The teenage years from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worst years in my life. At first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by myself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think so. They always told me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be free from them. I showed them I was independent by wearing strange clothes. Now I am leaving home for college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever I need help.<eoa>		 1．year改为years．考查名词复数．teenage years青少年应该是一段时间，为可数名词复数．
2．worse改为worst．考查形容词最高级．and为并列连词，the best相对的是the worst，应为最高级．
3．去掉the．考查固定搭配．at first意为"首先；最早"，是固定搭配．
4．yourself改为myself．考查代词．主语和宾语为同一个人，用反身代词myself作宾语．
5．such改为so．考查代词．根据句意：但我父母不这么认为．应为"they don’t think so."，so指代前面的一个观点．
6．tell改为told．考查动词时态．此处讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
7．freely改为free．考查形容词．be动词后接形容词作表语．
8．wear改为wearing．考查动名词．by是介词，后接动词时用动名词形式．
9．to改为for．考查介词．表示目的应用目的介词for，意为"以（提及地）为目的地"．
10．加I 考查代词．考查从句．whenever引导时间状语从句，句中缺少主语I，需加上人称代词I．
gpto1 【答案】
The teenage years from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worst years of my life. At first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by myself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think so. They always told me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be free from them. I showed them I was independent by wearing strange clothes. Now I am leaving home for college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever I need help.
<eoa>		 1．year改为years．考查名词复数．teenage years青少年应该是一段时间，为可数名词复数．
2．worse改为worst．考查形容词最高级．and为并列连词，the best相对的是the worst，应为最高级．
3．去掉the．考查固定搭配．at first意为"首先；最早"，是固定搭配．
4．yourself改为myself．考查代词．主语和宾语为同一个人，用反身代词myself作宾语．
5．such改为so．考查代词．根据句意：但我父母不这么认为．应为"they don’t think so."，so指代前面的一个观点．
6．tell改为told．考查动词时态．此处讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
7．freely改为free．考查形容词．be动词后接形容词作表语．
8．wear改为wearing．考查动名词．by是介词，后接动词时用动名词形式．
9．to改为for．考查介词．表示目的应用目的介词for，意为"以（提及地）为目的地"．
10．加I 考查代词．考查从句．whenever引导时间状语从句，句中缺少主语I，需加上人称代词I．
deepseekv3 【答案】The teenage years from 13 to 19 were the most difficult time for me. They were also the best and worst years in my life. At first, I thought I knew everything and could make decisions by myself. However, my parents didn’t seem to think so. They always told me what to do and how to do it. At one time, I even felt my parents couldn’t understand me so I hoped I could be free from them. I showed them I was independent by wearing strange clothes. Now I am leaving home for college. At last, I will be on my own, but I still want to have my parents to turn to whenever I need help.<eoa> 1．year改为years．考查名词复数．teenage years青少年应该是一段时间，为可数名词复数．
2．worse改为worst．考查形容词最高级．and为并列连词，the best相对的是the worst，应为最高级．
3．去掉the．考查固定搭配．at first意为"首先；最早"，是固定搭配．
4．yourself改为myself．考查代词．主语和宾语为同一个人，用反身代词myself作宾语．
5．such改为so．考查代词．根据句意：但我父母不这么认为．应为"they don’t think so."，so指代前面的一个观点．
6．tell改为told．考查动词时态．此处讲述的是过去的事情，要用一般过去时态．
7．freely改为free．考查形容词．be动词后接形容词作表语．
8．wear改为wearing．考查动名词．by是介词，后接动词时用动名词形式．
9．to改为for．考查介词．表示目的应用目的介词for，意为"以（提及地）为目的地"．
10．加I 考查代词．考查从句．whenever引导时间状语从句，句中缺少主语I，需加上人称代词I．