金声玉亮2.0模型评测报告

问题

请解答下面的英语短文改错题，仔细阅读题目并充分结合你你已有的知识，找出其中10处需要改动的地方。请你一步步思考，把修改后的短文写在【答案】和<eoa>之间。
完整的题目回答格式如下：【答案】 ...<eoa>
请你严格按照上述格式作答。
题目如下:短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
71.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove， I waited patiently unless the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together. ＂Not that way，＂ my mom tried to stop us but failed. She was right. It didn’t tum out as I had wished.

答案

模型	模型答案	正确答案
金声玉亮2.0	【答案】 Today I tried cooking a \simply\ simple dish myself. I like eating \frying\ fried tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must \to\ be easy to cook. My mom told me how to \preparing\ prepare it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces \but\ and put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with \chopstick\ chopsticks. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned \off\ on the stove. I waited patiently \unless\ until the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into ∧ the pan together. "Not that way," my mom tried to stop \us\ me but failed. She was right. It didn’t \tum\ turn out as I had wished. <eoa>	【答案】
deepseekr1	【答案】Today I tried cooking a <u>simple</u> dish myself. I like eating <u>fried</u> tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must <u>be</u> easy to cook. My mom told me how to <u>prepare</u> it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces <u>and</u> put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with <u>chopsticks</u>. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned <u>on</u> the stove. I waited patiently <u>until</u> the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into <u>the</u> pan together. "Not that way," my mom tried to stop <u>me</u> but failed. She was right. It didn’t turn out as I had wished.<eoa>	【答案】
gpto1	【答案】 Today I tried cooking a simply simple dish myself. I like eating frying fried tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must \to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing prepare it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but and put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick chopsticks . After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off on the stove, I waited patiently unless until the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into ∧ the pan together. "Not that way," my mom tried to stop us me but failed. She was right. It didn't tum out as I had wished. <eoa>	【答案】
GPT-4o	【答案】 Today I tried cooking a simple dish myself. I like eating fried tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must ∧ be easy to cook. My mom told me how to prepare it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces and put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopsticks. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned on the stove. I waited patiently until the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into the pan together. "Not that way," my mom tried to stop me but failed. She was right. It didn’t turn out as I had wished.<eoa>	【答案】
llama3.1-70B-Instruct	【答案】 Today I tried cooking a simple dish myself. I like eating fried tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must be easy to cook. My mom told me how to prepare it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopsticks. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned on the stove， I waited patiently until the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into the pan together. ＂Not that way，＂ my mom tried to stop me but failed. She was right. It didn’t turn out as I had wished.<eoa>	【答案】
llama3.1-405B-Instruct	【答案】 Today I tried cooking a simple dish myself. I like eating fried tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must be easy to cook. My mom told me how to prepare it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces and put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopsticks. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned on the stove， I waited patiently until the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into the pan together. ＂Not that way，＂ my mom tried to stop me but failed. She was right. It didn’t turn out as I had wished. <eoa>	【答案】
DeepSeek-Coder-V2	"【答案】\nToday I tried cooking a simple dish myself. I like eating fried tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must be easy to cook. My mom told me how to prepare it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces and put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopsticks. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned on the stove; I waited patiently until the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into the pan together. \"Not that way,\" my mom tried to stop me but failed. She was right. It didn't turn out as I had wished.<eoa>"	【答案】
Qwen2-72B-Instruct	"【答案】\nToday I tried cooking a simple dish myself. I like eating fried tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must be easy to cook. My mom told me how to prepare it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces and put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with a chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned on the stove, I waited patiently until the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into the pan together. \"Not that way,\" my mom tried to stop me but failed. She was right. It didn’t turn out as I had wished.\n<eoa>"	【答案】
baichuan4	【答案】 Today I tried cooking a simple dish myself. I like eating fried tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must be easy to cook. My mom told me how to prepare it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces and put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopsticks. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned on the stove, I waited patiently until the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into the pan together. "Not that way," my mom tried to stop me but failed. She was right. It didn't turn out as I had wished.	【答案】
doubao	【答案】Today I tried cooking a simple dish myself. I like eating fried tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must be easy to cook. My mom told me how to prepare it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces and put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopsticks. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned on the stove. I waited patiently until the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into the pan together. ＂Not that way,＂ my mom tried to stop me but failed. She was right. It didn’t tum out as I had wished. <eoa>	【答案】
minimax	【答案】 Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove， I waited patiently unless the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together. "Not that way," my mom tried to stop us but failed. She was right. It didn’t tum out as I had wished. 改正： Today I tried cooking a simple dish myself. I like eating fried tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must be easy to cook. My mom told me how to prepare it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces and put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with a chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove, I waited patiently until the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into the pan together. "Not that way," my mom tried to stop me but failed. She was right. It didn’t turn out as I had wished. <eoa>	【答案】
kimi	【答案】Today I tried cooking a simple dish myself. I like eating fried tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must be easy to cook. My mom told me how to prepare it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces and put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with a chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned on the stove, I waited patiently until the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into the pan together. "Not that way," my mom tried to stop me but failed. She was right. It didn't turn out as I had wished.<eoa>	【答案】
wenxinyiyan	【答案】 Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove， I waited patiently unless the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into ∧ pan together. ＂Not that way，＂ my mom tried to stop us but failed. She was right. It didn’t turn out as I had wished. 1. simply改为simple，用形容词修饰名词dish。 2. frying改为fried，表示“炒过的”西红柿，用过去分词作定语。 3. 去掉to，must后直接接动词原形，表示“一定”。 4. preparing改为prepare，疑问词后接不定式作宾语。 5. but改为and，前后是顺承关系。 6. chopstick改为chopsticks，chopsticks是复数形式，表示“筷子”。 7. off改为on，根据语境可知是“打开”炉子。 8. unless改为until/till，表示“直到”油热了。 9. 在into后加the，特指前面提到的那个锅。 10. us改为me，根据语境可知妈妈想阻止“我”，而不是“我们”。 <eoa>	【答案】
zhipu	【答案】 Today I tried cooking a simple dish myself. I like eating fried tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must be easy to cook. My mom told me how to prepare it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces and put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopsticks. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned on the stove, I waited patiently until the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into the pan together. "Not that way," my mom tried to stop me but failed. She was right. It didn’t turn out as I had wished.<eoa>	【答案】
gpto1	【答案】 Today I tried cooking a simply simple dish myself. I like eating frying fried tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must \to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing prepare it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but and put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick chopsticks . After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off on the stove, I waited patiently unless until the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into ∧ the pan together. "Not that way," my mom tried to stop us me but failed. She was right. It didn't tum out as I had wished. <eoa>	【答案】
deepseekv3	【答案】 Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself. I like eating fried tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must be easy to cook. My mom told me how to prepare it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces and put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopsticks. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned on the stove. I waited patiently until the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into the pan together. "Not that way," my mom tried to stop me but failed. She was right. It didn't turn out as I had wished. <eoa>	【答案】

模型

模型答案

正确答案

金声玉亮2.0

【答案】
Today I tried cooking a \simply\ simple dish myself. I like eating \frying\ fried tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must \to\ be easy to cook. My mom told me how to \preparing\ prepare it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces \but\ and put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with \chopstick\ chopsticks. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned \off\ on the stove. I waited patiently \unless\ until the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into ∧ the pan together. "Not that way," my mom tried to stop \us\ me but failed. She was right. It didn’t \tum\ turn out as I had wished.
<eoa>

【答案】

deepseekr1

【答案】Today I tried cooking a simple dish myself. I like eating fried tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must be easy to cook. My mom told me how to prepare it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces and put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopsticks. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned on the stove. I waited patiently until the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into the pan together. "Not that way," my mom tried to stop me but failed. She was right. It didn’t turn out as I had wished.<eoa>

【答案】

gpto1

【答案】

Today I tried cooking a

simply

simple

dish myself. I like eating

frying

fried

tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must \to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to

preparing

prepare

it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces

but

and

put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with

chopstick

chopsticks

. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned

off

on

the stove, I waited patiently

unless

until

the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into

∧

the

pan together. "Not that way," my mom tried to stop

us

me

but failed. She was right. It didn't tum out as I had wished.

<eoa>

【答案】

GPT-4o

【答案】
Today I tried cooking a **simple** dish myself. I like eating **fried** tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must ∧ be easy to cook. My mom told me how to **prepare** it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces **and** put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with **chopsticks**. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned **on** the stove. I waited patiently **until** the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into **the** pan together. "Not that way," my mom tried to stop **me** but failed. She was right. It didn’t **turn** out as I had wished.<eoa>

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llama3.1-70B-Instruct

【答案】 Today I tried cooking a simple dish myself. I like eating fried tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must be easy to cook. My mom told me how to prepare it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopsticks. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned on the stove， I waited patiently until the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into the pan together. ＂Not that way，＂ my mom tried to stop me but failed. She was right. It didn’t turn out as I had wished.<eoa>

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llama3.1-405B-Instruct

【答案】

Today I tried cooking a simple dish myself. I like eating fried tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must be easy to cook. My mom told me how to prepare it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces and put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopsticks. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned on the stove， I waited patiently until the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into the pan together. ＂Not that way，＂ my mom tried to stop me but failed. She was right. It didn’t turn out as I had wished.

<eoa>

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DeepSeek-Coder-V2

"【答案】\nToday I tried cooking a simple dish myself. I like eating fried tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must be easy to cook. My mom told me how to prepare it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces and put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopsticks. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned on the stove; I waited patiently until the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into the pan together. \"Not that way,\" my mom tried to stop me but failed. She was right. It didn't turn out as I had wished.<eoa>"

【答案】

Qwen2-72B-Instruct

"【答案】\nToday I tried cooking a **simple** dish myself. I like eating **fried** tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must **be** easy to cook. My mom told me how to **prepare** it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces **and** put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with a **chopstick**. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned **on** the stove, I waited patiently **until** the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into the **pan** together. \"Not that way,\" my mom tried to stop **me** but failed. She was right. It didn’t turn out as I had wished.\n<eoa>"

【答案】

baichuan4

【答案】
Today I tried cooking a simple dish myself. I like eating fried tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must be easy to cook. My mom told me how to prepare it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces and put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopsticks. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned on the stove, I waited patiently until the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into the pan together. "Not that way," my mom tried to stop me but failed. She was right. It didn't turn out as I had wished.

【答案】

doubao

【答案】Today I tried cooking a **simple** dish myself. I like eating **fried** tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must **be** easy to cook. My mom told me how to **prepare** it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces **and** put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with **chopsticks**. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned **on** the stove. I waited patiently **until** the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into **the** pan together. ＂Not that way,＂ my mom tried to stop **me** but failed. She was right. It didn’t tum out as I had wished. <eoa>

【答案】

minimax

【答案】
Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove， I waited patiently unless the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together. "Not that way," my mom tried to stop us but failed. She was right. It didn’t tum out as I had wished.
改正：
Today I tried cooking a simple dish myself. I like eating fried tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must be easy to cook. My mom told me how to prepare it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces and put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with a chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove, I waited patiently until the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into the pan together. "Not that way," my mom tried to stop me but failed. She was right. It didn’t turn out as I had wished.
<eoa>

【答案】

kimi

【答案】Today I tried cooking a simple dish myself. I like eating fried tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must be easy to cook. My mom told me how to prepare it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces and put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with a chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned on the stove, I waited patiently until the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into the pan together. "Not that way," my mom tried to stop me but failed. She was right. It didn't turn out as I had wished.<eoa>

【答案】

wenxinyiyan

【答案】
Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove， I waited patiently unless the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into ∧ pan together. ＂Not that way，＂ my mom tried to stop us but failed. She was right. It didn’t turn out as I had wished.

1. simply改为simple，用形容词修饰名词dish。
2. frying改为fried，表示“炒过的”西红柿，用过去分词作定语。
3. 去掉to，must后直接接动词原形，表示“一定”。
4. preparing改为prepare，疑问词后接不定式作宾语。
5. but改为and，前后是顺承关系。
6. chopstick改为chopsticks，chopsticks是复数形式，表示“筷子”。
7. off改为on，根据语境可知是“打开”炉子。
8. unless改为until/till，表示“直到”油热了。
9. 在into后加the，特指前面提到的那个锅。
10. us改为me，根据语境可知妈妈想阻止“我”，而不是“我们”。
<eoa>

【答案】

zhipu

【答案】
Today I tried cooking a simple dish myself. I like eating fried tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must be easy to cook. My mom told me how to prepare it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces and put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopsticks. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned on the stove, I waited patiently until the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into the pan together. "Not that way," my mom tried to stop me but failed. She was right. It didn’t turn out as I had wished.<eoa>

【答案】

gpto1

【答案】

deepseekv3

【答案】
Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself. I like eating fried tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must be easy to cook. My mom told me how to prepare it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces and put them aside. Next I broke the eggs into a bowl and beat them quickly with chopsticks. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned on the stove. I waited patiently until the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into the pan together. "Not that way," my mom tried to stop me but failed. She was right. It didn't turn out as I had wished.
<eoa>

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