问题

请解答下面的英语短文改错题,仔细阅读题目并充分结合你你已有的知识,找出其中10处需要改动的地方。请你一步步思考,把修改后的短文写在【答案】和<eoa>之间。
完整的题目回答格式如下:【答案】 ...<eoa>
请你严格按照上述格式作答。
题目如下:短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)
71.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Thank you for your letter, what really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve come China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I’m surely you’ll have a good time. Actually, I start to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, for I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together on every day. Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in China. See you sooner.

答案

模型 模型答案 正确答案
金声玉亮2.0 【答案】
Thank you for your letter, \what\ which really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve come ∧ to China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I’m \surely\ sure you’ll have a good time. Actually, I \start\ started to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, \for\ but I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer \vacations\ vacation. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, \such\ so that we can practice together \on\ every day. Best of luck with \yours\ your learning kung fu in China. See you \sooner\ soon.
<eoa>
【答案】1.what→which
2.come后加to
3.surely→sure
4.start→started
5.for→but / yet
6.vacations→vacation
7.such→so
8.去掉on
9.yours→your / you
10.sooner→soon
deepseekr1

【答案】Thank you for your letter, which really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve come to China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I’m sure you’ll have a good time. Actually, I started to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, but I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacation. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, so that we can practice together every day. Best of luck with your learning kung fu in China. See you soon.<eoa>
【答案】1.what→which
2.come后加to
3.surely→sure
4.start→started
5.for→but / yet
6.vacations→vacation
7.such→so
8.去掉on
9.yours→your / you
10.sooner→soon
gpto1 【答案】

Thank you for your letter, **what** <u>which</u> really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve come ∧ to China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I’m **surely** <u>sure</u> you’ll have a good time. Actually, I **start** <u>started</u> to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, **for** <u>but</u> I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer **vacations** <u>vacation</u>. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, **such** <u>so</u> that we can practice together **on** \ every day. Best of luck with **yours** <u>your</u> learning kung fu in China. See you **sooner** <u>soon</u>.

<eoa>
【答案】1.what→which
2.come后加to
3.surely→sure
4.start→started
5.for→but / yet
6.vacations→vacation
7.such→so
8.去掉on
9.yours→your / you
10.sooner→soon
GPT-4o 【答案】
Thank you for your letter, \what/ which really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve come ∧to China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I’m \surely/ sure you’ll have a good time. Actually, I \start/ started to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, \for/ but I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer \vacations/ vacation. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, \such/ so that we can practice together \on/ every day. Best of luck with \yours/ your learning kung fu in China. See you \sooner/ soon.
<eoa>
【答案】1.what→which
2.come后加to
3.surely→sure
4.start→started
5.for→but / yet
6.vacations→vacation
7.such→so
8.去掉on
9.yours→your / you
10.sooner→soon
llama3.1-70B-Instruct

【答案】 Thank you for your letter, which really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve come to China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I’m sure you’ll have a good time. Actually, I started to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, for I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacation. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, so that we can practice together every day. Best of luck with your learning kung fu in China. See you soon.<eoa>
【答案】1.what→which
2.come后加to
3.surely→sure
4.start→started
5.for→but / yet
6.vacations→vacation
7.such→so
8.去掉on
9.yours→your / you
10.sooner→soon
llama3.1-405B-Instruct

【答案】

Thank you for your letter, which really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve come to China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I’m sure you’ll have a good time. Actually, I started to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, but I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacation. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, so that we can practice together every day. Best of luck with your learning kung fu in China. See you soon.

<eoa>
【答案】1.what→which
2.come后加to
3.surely→sure
4.start→started
5.for→but / yet
6.vacations→vacation
7.such→so
8.去掉on
9.yours→your / you
10.sooner→soon
DeepSeek-Coder-V2 "【答案】\nThank you for your letter, which really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve come to China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I’m sure you’ll have a good time. Actually, I started to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, but I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacation. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, so that we can practice together every day. Best of luck with your learning kung fu in China. See you soon.<eoa>" 【答案】1.what→which
2.come后加to
3.surely→sure
4.start→started
5.for→but / yet
6.vacations→vacation
7.such→so
8.去掉on
9.yours→your / you
10.sooner→soon
Qwen2-72B-Instruct "【答案】\nThank you for your letter, which really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve come to China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I’m sure you’ll have a good time. Actually, I started to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, but I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacation. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, so that we can practice together every day. Best of luck with your learning kung fu in China. See you soon.\n<eoa>" 【答案】1.what→which
2.come后加to
3.surely→sure
4.start→started
5.for→but / yet
6.vacations→vacation
7.such→so
8.去掉on
9.yours→your / you
10.sooner→soon
baichuan4 【答案】
Thank you for your letter, which really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve come to China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I’m sure you’ll have a good time. Actually, I started to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, but I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacation. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, so that we can practice together every day. Best of luck with your learning kung fu in China. See you soon.
【答案】1.what→which
2.come后加to
3.surely→sure
4.start→started
5.for→but / yet
6.vacations→vacation
7.such→so
8.去掉on
9.yours→your / you
10.sooner→soon
doubao 【答案】Thank you for your letter, which really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve come to China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I’m sure you’ll have a good time. Actually, I started to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, but I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacation. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, so that we can practice together every day. Best of luck with your learning kung fu in China. See you soon. <eoa> 【答案】1.what→which
2.come后加to
3.surely→sure
4.start→started
5.for→but / yet
6.vacations→vacation
7.such→so
8.去掉on
9.yours→your / you
10.sooner→soon
minimax 【答案】
Thank you for your letter, which really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve come to China to learn kung fu at a school in my hometown. I’m sure you’ll have a good time. Actually, I started to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, but I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacation. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, so that we can practice together every day. Best of luck with your learning kung fu in China. See you soon.
<eoa>
【答案】1.what→which
2.come后加to
3.surely→sure
4.start→started
5.for→but / yet
6.vacations→vacation
7.such→so
8.去掉on
9.yours→your / you
10.sooner→soon
kimi 【答案】Thank you for your letter, which really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve come to China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I’m sure you’ll have a good time. Actually, I started to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, but I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for the summer vacation. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, so that we can practice together every day. Best of luck with your learning kung fu in China. See you soon.<eoa> 【答案】1.what→which
2.come后加to
3.surely→sure
4.start→started
5.for→but / yet
6.vacations→vacation
7.such→so
8.去掉on
9.yours→your / you
10.sooner→soon
wenxinyiyan 【答案】
Thank you for your letter, which really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve come to China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I’m sure you’ll have a good time. Actually, I started to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, but I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacation. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, so that we can practice together every day. Best of luck with your learning kung fu in China. See you soon.
<eoa>
【答案】1.what→which
2.come后加to
3.surely→sure
4.start→started
5.for→but / yet
6.vacations→vacation
7.such→so
8.去掉on
9.yours→your / you
10.sooner→soon
zhipu 【答案】
Thank you for your letter, which really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve come to China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I’m sure you’ll have a good time. Actually, I started to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, for I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacation. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, so that we can practice together every day. Best of luck with your learning kung fu in China. See you soon.<eoa>
【答案】1.what→which
2.come后加to
3.surely→sure
4.start→started
5.for→but / yet
6.vacations→vacation
7.such→so
8.去掉on
9.yours→your / you
10.sooner→soon
gpto1 【答案】

Thank you for your letter, **what** <u>which</u> really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve come ∧ to China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I’m **surely** <u>sure</u> you’ll have a good time. Actually, I **start** <u>started</u> to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, **for** <u>but</u> I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer **vacations** <u>vacation</u>. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, **such** <u>so</u> that we can practice together **on** \ every day. Best of luck with **yours** <u>your</u> learning kung fu in China. See you **sooner** <u>soon</u>.

<eoa>
【答案】1.what→which
2.come后加to
3.surely→sure
4.start→started
5.for→but / yet
6.vacations→vacation
7.such→so
8.去掉on
9.yours→your / you
10.sooner→soon
deepseekv3 【答案】Thank you for your letter, which really made me happy. I’m glad to know that you’ve come to China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. I’m sure you’ll have a good time. Actually, I started to learn kung fu when I was seven years old, but I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacation. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, so that we can practice together every day. Best of luck with your learning kung fu in China. See you soon.<eoa> 【答案】1.what→which
2.come后加to
3.surely→sure
4.start→started
5.for→but / yet
6.vacations→vacation
7.such→so
8.去掉on
9.yours→your / you
10.sooner→soon