金声玉亮2.0模型评测报告

问题

请解答下面的英语短文改错题，仔细阅读题目并充分结合你你已有的知识，找出其中10处需要改动的地方。请你一步步思考，把修改后的短文写在【答案】和<eoa>之间。
完整的题目回答格式如下：【答案】 ...<eoa>
请你严格按照上述格式作答。
题目如下:短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
71.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families. In order to make surely all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have the bowl of egg soup while I had to eat an apple. My dad don’t like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we’re forced eat things, we may become ill.
But he insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food what is provided by Mom with appreciation.

答案

模型	模型答案	正确答案
金声玉亮2.0	【答案】 My mom is really _concerned_ with the health of everyone in our _family_. In order to make _sure_ all of us are in good health, _she_ makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have _a_ bowl of egg soup while I _have_ to eat an apple. My dad _doesn't_ like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. I _told_ my mom that if we’re forced _to_ eat things, we may become ill. But _she_ insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food _that_ is provided by Mom with appreciation. <eoa>	【答案】
deepseekr1	【答案】My mom is really concerned with the health of everyone in our family. In order to make sure all of us are in good health, she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have a bowl of egg soup while I have to eat an apple. My dad doesn’t like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we’re forced to eat things, we may become ill. But she insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food that is provided by Mom with appreciation.<eoa>	【答案】
gpto1	【答案】 My mom is really _concerning_<sub>concerned</sub> with the health of everyone in our _families_<sub>family</sub>. In order to make _surely_<sub>sure</sub> all of us are in good health, \and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have _the_<sub>a</sub> bowl of egg soup while I _had_<sub>have</sub> to eat an apple. My dad _don’t_<sub>doesn't</sub> like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we’re forced ∧ to eat things, we may become ill. But _he_<sub>she</sub> insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food _what_<sub>that</sub> is provided by Mom with appreciation. <eoa>	【答案】
GPT-4o	【答案】 My mom is really _concerned_ with the health of everyone in our _family_. In order to make _sure_ all of us are in good health, ∧ she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have _a_ bowl of egg soup while I _have_ to eat an apple. My dad _doesn’t_ like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we’re forced ∧ eat things, we may become ill. But _she_ insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food _that_ is provided by Mom with appreciation. <eoa>	【答案】
llama3.1-70B-Instruct	【答案】 My mom is really concerned with the health of everyone in our family. In order to make sure all of us are in good health, she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have a bowl of egg soup while I have to eat an apple. My dad doesn’t like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we’re forced to eat things, we may become ill. But she insists on our eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food that is provided by Mom with appreciation.<eoa>	【答案】
llama3.1-405B-Instruct	【答案】 My mom is really concerned with the health of everyone in our family. In order to make sure all of us are in good health, she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have a bowl of egg soup while I have to eat an apple. My dad doesn’t like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we’re forced to eat things, we may become ill. But she insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food that is provided by Mom with appreciation. <eoa>	【答案】
DeepSeek-Coder-V2	"【答案】\nMy mom is really concerned about the health of everyone in our family. In order to make sure all of us are in good health, she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have a bowl of egg soup while I have to eat an apple. My dad doesn't like the soup and I don't enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we're forced to eat things, we may become ill.\nBut she insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food that is provided by Mom with appreciation.\n<eoa>"	【答案】
Qwen2-72B-Instruct	"【答案】\nMy mom is really concerned with the health of everyone in our family. In order to make sure all of us are in good health, she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have a bowl of egg soup while I have to eat an apple. My dad doesn't like the soup and I don't enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we're forced to eat things, we may become ill. But she insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food that is provided by Mom with appreciation.\n<eoa>"	【答案】
baichuan4	【答案】 1. concerning → concerned 2. families → family 3. make surely → make sure 4. 去掉and 5. the bowl of → a bowl of 6. had → have 7. don’t → doesn’t 8. forced eat → forced to eat 9. he → she 10. what → that/which	【答案】
doubao	【答案】My mom is really concerning→concerned with the health of everyone in our families. In order to make surely→sure all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have the→a bowl of egg soup while I had→have to eat an apple. My dad don't→doesn't like the soup and I don't enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we're forced∧→to eat things, we may become ill. But he→she insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food what→that is provided by Mom with appreciation. <eoa>	【答案】
minimax	【答案】 My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families. In order to make surely all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have the bowl of egg soup while I had to eat an apple. My dad don’t like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we’re forced eat things, we may become ill. But he insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food what is provided by Mom with appreciation. 【修改】 My mom is really concerned with the health of everyone in our family. In order to make sure that surely all of us are in good health, she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have a bowl of egg soup while I have to eat an apple. My dad doesn’t like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. I told my mom that if we’re forced to eat things, we may become ill. But she insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food that is provided by Mom with appreciation. <eoa>	【答案】
kimi	【答案】My mom is really concerned with the health of everyone in our family. In order to make sure all of us are in good health, she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have a bowl of egg soup while I have to eat an apple. My dad doesn't like the soup and I don't enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we're forced to eat things, we may become ill. But she insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food that is provided by Mom with appreciation. <eoa>	【答案】
wenxinyiyan	【答案】 My mom is really concerned with the health of everyone in our family. In order to make sure all of us are in good health, she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have a bowl of egg soup while I have to eat an apple. My dad doesn’t like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we’re forced to eat things, we may become ill. But she insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food that is provided by Mom with appreciation. <eoa>	【答案】
zhipu	【答案】 My mom is really concerned with the health of everyone in our family. In order to make sure all of us are in good health, she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have a bowl of egg soup while I have to eat an apple. My dad doesn’t like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we’re forced to eat things, we may become ill. But she insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food that is provided by Mom with appreciation.<eoa>	【答案】
gpto1	【答案】 My mom is really _concerning_<sub>concerned</sub> with the health of everyone in our _families_<sub>family</sub>. In order to make _surely_<sub>sure</sub> all of us are in good health, \and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have _the_<sub>a</sub> bowl of egg soup while I _had_<sub>have</sub> to eat an apple. My dad _don’t_<sub>doesn't</sub> like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we’re forced ∧ to eat things, we may become ill. But _he_<sub>she</sub> insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food _what_<sub>that</sub> is provided by Mom with appreciation. <eoa>	【答案】
deepseekv3	【答案】My mom is really concerned with the health of everyone in our family. In order to make sure all of us are in good health, she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have a bowl of egg soup while I have to eat an apple. My dad doesn’t like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we’re forced to eat things, we may become ill. But she insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food that is provided by Mom with appreciation.<eoa>	【答案】

模型

模型答案

正确答案

金声玉亮2.0

【答案】
My mom is really _concerned_ with the health of everyone in our _family_. In order to make _sure_ all of us are in good health, _she_ makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have _a_ bowl of egg soup while I _have_ to eat an apple. My dad _doesn't_ like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. I _told_ my mom that if we’re forced _to_ eat things, we may become ill. But _she_ insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food _that_ is provided by Mom with appreciation.
<eoa>

【答案】

deepseekr1

【答案】My mom is really concerned with the health of everyone in our family. In order to make sure all of us are in good health, she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have a bowl of egg soup while I have to eat an apple. My dad doesn’t like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we’re forced to eat things, we may become ill. But she insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food that is provided by Mom with appreciation.<eoa>

【答案】

gpto1

【答案】
My mom is really _concerning_concerned with the health of everyone in our _families_family. In order to make _surely_sure all of us are in good health, \and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have _the_a bowl of egg soup while I _had_have to eat an apple. My dad _don’t_doesn't like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we’re forced ∧
to
eat things, we may become ill.

But _he_she insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food _what_that is provided by Mom with appreciation.
<eoa>

【答案】

GPT-4o

【答案】
My mom is really _concerned_ with the health of everyone in our _family_. In order to make _sure_ all of us are in good health, ∧ she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have _a_ bowl of egg soup while I _have_ to eat an apple. My dad _doesn’t_ like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we’re forced ∧ eat things, we may become ill.
But _she_ insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food _that_ is provided by Mom with appreciation.
<eoa>

【答案】

llama3.1-70B-Instruct

【答案】
My mom is really concerned with the health of everyone in our family. In order to make sure all of us are in good health, she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have a bowl of egg soup while I have to eat an apple. My dad doesn’t like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we’re forced to eat things, we may become ill.
But she insists on our eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food that is provided by Mom with appreciation.<eoa>

【答案】

llama3.1-405B-Instruct

【答案】

My mom is really concerned with the health of everyone in our family. In order to make sure all of us are in good health, she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have a bowl of egg soup while I have to eat an apple. My dad doesn’t like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we’re forced to eat things, we may become ill.
But she insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food that is provided by Mom with appreciation.

<eoa>

【答案】

DeepSeek-Coder-V2

"【答案】\nMy mom is really concerned about the health of everyone in our family. In order to make sure all of us are in good health, she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have a bowl of egg soup while I have to eat an apple. My dad doesn't like the soup and I don't enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we're forced to eat things, we may become ill.\nBut she insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food that is provided by Mom with appreciation.\n<eoa>"

【答案】

Qwen2-72B-Instruct

"【答案】\nMy mom is really concerned with the health of everyone in our family. In order to make sure all of us are in good health, she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have a bowl of egg soup while I have to eat an apple. My dad doesn't like the soup and I don't enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we're forced to eat things, we may become ill. But she insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food that is provided by Mom with appreciation.\n<eoa>"

【答案】

baichuan4

【答案】
1. concerning → concerned
2. families → family
3. make surely → make sure
4. 去掉and
5. the bowl of → a bowl of
6. had → have
7. don’t → doesn’t
8. forced eat → forced to eat
9. he → she
10. what → that/which

【答案】

doubao

【答案】My mom is really concerning→concerned with the health of everyone in our families. In order to make surely→sure all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have the→a bowl of egg soup while I had→have to eat an apple. My dad don't→doesn't like the soup and I don't enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we're forced∧→to eat things, we may become ill. But he→she insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food what→that is provided by Mom with appreciation. <eoa>

【答案】

minimax

【答案】
My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families. In order to make surely all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have the bowl of egg soup while I had to eat an apple. My dad don’t like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we’re forced eat things, we may become ill.
But he insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food what is provided by Mom with appreciation.
【修改】
My mom is really concerned with the health of everyone in our family. In order to make sure that surely all of us are in good health, she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have a bowl of egg soup while I have to eat an apple. My dad doesn’t like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. I told my mom that if we’re forced to eat things, we may become ill.
But she insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food that is provided by Mom with appreciation.
<eoa>

【答案】

kimi

【答案】My mom is really **concerned** with the health of everyone in our **family**. In order to **make sure** all of us are in good health, she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have a bowl of egg soup while I **have** to eat an apple. My dad **doesn't** like the soup and I **don't** enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we're forced **to** eat things, we may become ill.
But she **insists** on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food **that** is provided by Mom with **appreciation**.

<eoa>

【答案】

wenxinyiyan

【答案】
My mom is really concerned with the health of everyone in our family. In order to make sure all of us are in good health, she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have a bowl of egg soup while I have to eat an apple. My dad doesn’t like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we’re forced to eat things, we may become ill.
But she insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food that is provided by Mom with appreciation.
<eoa>

【答案】

zhipu

【答案】
My mom is really concerned with the health of everyone in our family. In order to make sure all of us are in good health, she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have a bowl of egg soup while I have to eat an apple. My dad doesn’t like the soup and I don’t enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if we’re forced to eat things, we may become ill.
But she insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food that is provided by Mom with appreciation.<eoa>

【答案】

gpto1

【答案】

deepseekv3

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